polles's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tom Fulp's Christmas!!!]

Umm...

se7en! You coppied the description right from wikipedia. Well, the movie was an okay song. Hi Tom!!!

TornFulp responds:

Hi Polles :D

[Owls]

lol

Pretty funny and well done, but whats the reason that this particuliar weebl animation is better than the rest. weebl has made so many flashes of great quality now, there really isn't even much of a need for a review

[Pokemondongo]

es asi-asi its okay

no risa. me no gusta

not funny. i dont like

[Pacman Gone Wrong!]

lol

That was definatly my better than my first flash! good job! but when the top of his head got chopped off, it reminded me of terror tunes and i got all creepd out

[The fist]

okay

It was short, but pretty funny. I liked it.

[Madness short "retarded"]

yay madness

short, but strange and i like strange.

[Blopa'sChronicles:TRtL 01]

Needs work

Basicly, It was just another really short flash that are very common on NG. There really was not much of a plot or anything, just a skit about "somthing is going to happen." If whatever DID happen in the movie it would probably be decent. I understand that it is just the beginning of it, but you could have waited to submit it and made more to it. You could also work more on the graphics too they were just a bunch of sticks and everything else was pretty poorly drawn in flash so you should really work on that. Im no artist, and could do no better, but I don't make flashes. Another big thing was the huge lack of animation. If you are going to be an animator, your going to need to learn how to animate better. You can find a ton of tuts right here on NG. Now about the sound... well for most of the flash, there was none and then at the end there was that annoying cracking sound. Most good flashes need voices or at least a little music. Oh yeah and check your spelling too, thats pretty important. Im pretty much done here, but the last thing you need to keep in mind is if your going to have a scene selection, its going to have to be longer than 2 little scenes. Overall, it was pretty bad but keep practicing and (hopefully) you'll get better. Now Im done!

~Polles

[Clay Smash]

LEIK OMG U KILLED MEH CHEZ!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol yeah that was a crap camera i was leik there

[poninjas in runescape?? 2]

You call that runescape?

Umm... maybe you could improve your flash by making it like runescape! boss???? other than that good job

[DONT WATCH]

A picture...

Well at least you tried lol